Hi.
I actually joined the forums because of this.
I see alot of info/text in the game that either needs a little correction or is more or less impossible to understand.
I would love to help making the game better, especially for new players (as myself) but I see a problem with using the in-game suggestion option. In my opinion, close to everything should be rewritten, for both correct info but also a more coherent text, where the info on modules, ships etc. match and look alike.
As mentioned I’d love to help, but I’d need a more direct contact with a dev who understands enough english. I would ask him “is this what it is supposed to mean” and we owuld work our way from there.
I’ll add some examples below:
I think it means. On use all allies in range become immune…
This may be understandable, but words clutter and the “googloly translaty” just seems a bit off.
This is a common thing throughout the game. Many places ‘on’ is used instead of ‘in’. A minor detail, but it still have quite the impact.
This makes perfect sense, but I’m guessing because of how russian language works compared to english, translation puts some meanings last in a sentence instead of in the front.
Or it could just be a typo.
‘In space and on the surface’ can be discussed, perhaps there is something in the game I dont know about yet.
What really makes this module and many others confusing, is the amount of data in no specific order. It could easily be divided in to certain groups for f.ex what mode it is in, and not just in one pile.
Groups could be for offensive stats and defensive stats. Active/passive and so on.
But this isn’t why I’m here, just a sidenote I’ve noticed, though it do go hand in hand with the general order of the text in the game.
This is a few picks I’ve seen in the game, there are many more, but many of them have been passed right by because there is not much doubt what a missile do, or an EM shield buff.
I hope the dev’s wont take this as irrelevant criticism and instead see the eagerness from a fan trying to make a great game better.
Dev’s let me hear from you if you think I can be of assistance and you’d like my help.